Tuesday 21 July 2020
A silly story about a cat and a dog
Once there was a cat called umm cat that lived in a big hat. One day the cat went under a mat and a dog sat on the mat where the cat was. When the dog left the cat moved the mat and the cat was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo flat. Then the cat got up but the cat was still flat so the cat lived the rest of its life flat. Then one day the cat wanted revenge so the cat put the dog under the mat while it was sleeping. It took an hour to put the dog under the mat because the cat was weak because the cat is flat. So then the cat sat on the mat then the dog got flat. Then the cat walked back to the big hat. Then the dog woke up and removed the mat then the dog got mad because he was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo flat. Then along came a goat the dog went under the mat to hide from the cat. Then the goat sat on the mat were the dog was.THE END
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Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison I am a year 8 that goes to Yaldhurst Model School.
WOW! I love your story I am actually a big fan of writing and love looking and reading others work. i think that an amazing way to do this would be through a slide and make sure to add in some things that you feel in the moment or that the dog feels.
What made you write about this?
Are you going to do another part?
Kind Regards!
-Maddie
Hi Kumra school I liked the story it was funny and interesting I liked the bit were the cat sat on the dog because how could the cat make the dog flat when she was flat I have read a book similar were the cat lives in a cat and gets mad at a dog I think that if you had put more detail to the story and also maybe you could put a little less of the o's
ReplyDeleteWHy did you make this story?
why did the cat live in a cat?
from Bridie